FIRSTWORKS

It's about telling a story

Day 1 – Your first ten words

Day 2 – The first 50 words

Day 3 – 100 words in 10

Day 4 – Sounding natural

Day 5 – Starting dialogue

Day 6 – Show don’t tell

Day 7 – Writing a place

Day 8 – Writing a character

Day 9 – Managing pace

Day 10 – Editing

Pause for reflection

Day 11 – 200 words

Day 12 – Starting

Day 13 – Finishing

Day 14 – Starting and finishing

Day 15 – Who’s telling the story

Day 16 – Not another narrator

Day 17 – Pick a genre

Day 18 – Pick another genre

Day 19 – A mix of dialogue and place

Day 20 – A mix of dialogue and character

Making and keeping notes

Day 21 – Writing the first 500

Day 22 – 500 of dialogue, the

easiest place to start

Day 23 – 500 of character description

Day24 – 500 describing a place

Day 25 – 500 describing a historical event

Day 26 – 500 of autobiography

Day 27 – 500 words diary entry

Day 28 – Spontaneous writing

Day 29 – A planning session

Day 30 – 500 of your own

That’s the end of the beginning

Examples

Day 6 – Show don’t tell

Objective: We don’t need every minute detail

How many times have you heard it? Show don’t tell. And still we see it in so many novels where the writer feels obliged to give us a total description of a person or a place before a word is spoken or any action takes place.

There are occasions when a person or object needs to be described because that is a vital part of the story, but too often they are actually or virtually inanimate, saying nothing or doing very little. Your sleuth, for example, may be covertly watching a nightclub and describes the gangster/doorman who is never going to be mentioned again. You might ask why you need to describe them in that situation, but we’ll let that go.

A few words in the dialogue or the action tells us so much. Don’t say he walked with a limp, say he limped into the room. Don’t say she had blonde hair, say she played with her blonde hair while she considered his proposal.

Gently, piece by piece, build up an image of the character in the reader’s mind because if you blow it all in one paragraph of description the chances are they will have forgotten most of it within a few paragraphs and you have lost your chance of a more interesting narrative. Our examples become, he walked into the room and she played with her hair. Boring.

Alternatively, let other characters describe the features that stand out. ‘George wondered how he got the limp,’ or ‘He wasn’t deceived by the blonde hair, red pouting lips and fluttering eyelashes.’

Put action into other description. ‘A dozen gulls screamed at each other following the plough as it was hauled across the field at the bottom of the valley,’ rather than ‘A tractor was ploughing a field.’ Such description can be even more useful if it involves the character, ‘John refocused his binoculars to watch a dozen gulls scream at each other as they followed the plough in the valley.’

Fortunately this is one of those tasks where it becomes easier, the quicker you write and allow the character and scene to develop as you write it. Spend too long thinking about it and your work will become blocky and you won’t like it.

Two more benefits, you may find in the future, are that the character you had in mind when you started takes on his/her own personality independent of what you had intended, and, if you keep your description to essentials the reader will create/imagine what they look like. If you’ve ever listened to a radio play or podcast, it is almost inevitable that you created an image of the characters in your head.

Tip: If you overdo the description you are likely to kill the action. If your hero punches someone, you don’t want to wait for 100 words of description before you find out they are unconscious.

Summary: Drop description sparingly into the story and make sure it contributes to the story. You can tell us someone is blonde early on if it is going to be relevant later or it immediately gives us an impression of them. But don’t do it, if you don’t need it.